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Story Idea
Story:
Once there was 6 tribes Fire, Water, Wind, Earth, Light and Dark.
They exsisted in peace togethor living until the 3 nations of Water, Wind and Earth
attack the other, 3 Nations Fire, Light and Dark attacked back now they are teamed, togethor
to fight in this war. But a legended exsisted that fore told this and, said a great hero, whould
save them and 3 others from the Tribes: Fire, Light and Dark to open the Gemni Gates to end this war and
bring peace back to the, world or... Maybe not. The 6 tribes have to all get 1 person as a gate keeper,
to agree to open the gates of Gemni. But what lies past there is unknow to people of, there land.
So theres my WIP story any feed back is highly apprecated
Once there was 6 tribes Fire, Water, Wind, Earth, Light and Dark.
They exsisted in peace togethor living until the 3 nations of Water, Wind and Earth
attack the other, 3 Nations Fire, Light and Dark attacked back now they are teamed, togethor
to fight in this war. But a legended exsisted that fore told this and, said a great hero, whould
save them and 3 others from the Tribes: Fire, Light and Dark to open the Gemni Gates to end this war and
bring peace back to the, world or... Maybe not. The 6 tribes have to all get 1 person as a gate keeper,
to agree to open the gates of Gemni. But what lies past there is unknow to people of, there land.
So theres my WIP story any feed back is highly apprecated
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Its really actually not that bad! I like the idea, but I am still a little fuzzy on some things...
1: why are the tribes fighting each other?
2: is there one hero, or your whole group be filled with 1 hero from each tribe?
3: what is the main goal of these heros?
4: is there any specific evil boss, or is it just the tribes and the fight to get into the door?
5: Why am I not in the story?? *JK*
1: why are the tribes fighting each other?
2: is there one hero, or your whole group be filled with 1 hero from each tribe?
3: what is the main goal of these heros?
4: is there any specific evil boss, or is it just the tribes and the fight to get into the door?
5: Why am I not in the story?? *JK*
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The Creator wrote:Its really actually not that bad! I like the idea, but I am still a little fuzzy on some things...
1: why are the tribes fighting each other?
2: is there one hero, or your whole group be filled with 1 hero from each tribe?
3: what is the main goal of these heros?
4: is there any specific evil boss, or is it just the tribes and the fight to get into the door?
5: Why am I not in the story?? *JK*
1. Well can't give away to much right now
2. There is 1 True hero and 3 that the prophecy said whould help he/she
3. Uhhhh Opening the Gemni Gate that is in the story
4. Well the tribes don't fight each other to the door and Well thats a major Spoiler
5. BECAUSE! THIS ISN'T A COMMUNITY GAME oh caps lock
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Ah... I see! Alright! This sounds really interesting then! Cant wait for you to finish it!
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Very cool kyle my problem is it reminds me a little of avatar the last airbender. But I really think its a good idea is this a game idea or an actual book though?
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Game and yeah partly a avatar kinda thing but Gemni and Light and Dark aren't elements in avatarElfosng wrote:Very cool kyle my problem is it reminds me a little of avatar the last airbender. But I really think its a good idea is this a game idea or an actual book though?
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Man this sounds way interesting Kyle. BTW it's together not togethor. Other than that,
1. How do the hero(s) open the Gemni gates? (And is it Gemini or Gemni?)
2. What weapons do we get to use to keel stuff in it?
3. Do we get to choose which tribe we wanna be in?
4. How many nations are in each tribe/continent or whatever.
And it's Legend not Legended.
1. How do the hero(s) open the Gemni gates? (And is it Gemini or Gemni?)
2. What weapons do we get to use to keel stuff in it?
3. Do we get to choose which tribe we wanna be in?
4. How many nations are in each tribe/continent or whatever.
And it's Legend not Legended.
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[quote="BasilMeer"]Man this sounds way interesting Kyle. BTW it's together not togethor. Other than that,
1. How do the hero(s) open the Gemni gates? (And is it Gemini or Gemni?)
2. What weapons do we get to use to keel stuff in it?
3. Do we get to choose which tribe we wanna be in?
4. How many nations are in each tribe/continent or whatever.
GRAMMER NAZI!!! * JK!! *
Actually, I think that it would be pretty cool to be able to choose your tribe... FIRE ALL THE WAY!
1. How do the hero(s) open the Gemni gates? (And is it Gemini or Gemni?)
2. What weapons do we get to use to keel stuff in it?
3. Do we get to choose which tribe we wanna be in?
4. How many nations are in each tribe/continent or whatever.
BasilMeer wrote:And it's Legend not Legended.
BasilMeer wrote:BTW it's together not togethor.
GRAMMER NAZI!!! * JK!! *
Actually, I think that it would be pretty cool to be able to choose your tribe... FIRE ALL THE WAY!
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Thanks for the Grammar Lesson lolBasilMeer wrote:Man this sounds way interesting Kyle. BTW it's together not togethor. Other than that,
1. How do the hero(s) open the Gemni gates? (And is it Gemini or Gemni?)
2. What weapons do we get to use to keel stuff in it?
3. Do we get to choose which tribe we wanna be in?
4. How many nations are in each tribe/continent or whatever.
And it's Legend not Legended.
1.
And Gemni it's something I made up like in Dragon quest CelestriansThe Story wrote:
he 6 tribes have to all get 1 person as a gate keeper,
to agree to open the gates of Gemni.
2. SPOILER!!!!!!
3. No your in the Good Side which ironically is this: Fire, Light and Dark
4. Well every Tribe which is what they call like how there's Asia, Americas, Oceania etc.
Nation is the Area the Tribe lives in
There is only 1 in each. Well in Fire and Earth
there is an Island, in the Fire Tribe there is the Volcano named after the greatest warrior "Farmitsu"
and in the Earth Tribe, there is a Island as well but no name yet lol
5. Oh wait no 5 lol
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sounds good! I cant wait to be FIRE!!
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